Friendship Cannot Be Separated Because Of Distance
To be
better friends are not too hard and easy. Sometimes we also should choose the
people’s personality that they have. For example, this person has a good personality
such as: honest, kind, easy going, loyal, high achieving that person has high
achieving in academic, easy to understand the material, and of course they can
be a good motivator for us. My best friend can change my mind set become focus
on one point center to get successfulness in getting something like got a new
girlfriend.
I have
one friend that makes me feels comfortable to him. His name is Made Rizky
Pratista. I met him when I was in senior high school. First time I saw him like
same as smaller body as me. When he didn’t go to house because of his friend left
him in school, I saw him walked to go to house. I know his house is far from
school, so I initiated to accompany him to go to his house. From that
experience, I have good relationship with his family even his best friend in
the village.
He is
one of my good listeners about love, my experiences, my problems and he is also
one of motivators for finding some girlfriends that I like. He is kind person
who is easy to find and accept new friends become closer; that’s why he calls with
many kind of unique name. One of his close names is ‘Blonking’ because he has less hair on forehead. Honest person is
one of his personalities. Everything that he can share, he shares to me and if
he has things such as books, equipments, etc, sometimes he will give me what he
has and he always tell me what is. If he has some secret that he did not want
the other knows that secret, he will tell me. His characteristic is easy going.
Every time and everywhere, if he went with me his parent will give him to go
out. That’s why he usually used me to see his girlfriend at night. Hmm, poor me
but it’s no problem for me. He also has good motivator for me that make what I
want to get, he can give me how the way I can get it.
He has some skills that other people can’t do
that and me too, such as swimming, and gaming. He can swim farer than me and he
can dive deeply than the other. We have same hobbies like playing football,
listening music, playing music, and of course game too. He is the one of the
best player in “Guitar Hero” games. He can play with excellent score, about 99%
he can reach the best score than ever and I only got score up to 75%. How
awesome he is.
So my
favorite friend is not only care to me or himself, but care to the other, of
course too to his/her family, his friends and also in social environment.
based on your essay, i can conclude that the way you describe your essay is good, you describe his personality,characteristic, and his skill clearly. But there is a mistake that i found in your essay. It is "Every time and everywhere, if he went with me his parent will give him to go out". It should use would+v1 not will+v1. but over all is good.
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