Saturday, March 9, 2013

Descriptive (Protest)



A New Terrible House  

What Happened with this new house? I asked to my new house. That was very trouble and disappointing me. This is my experience about my new house going to be big trouble which is should repair again and again.  
My family had planned a new house, wish that house will be nice to see and nice to stay there. First of this plan comes from my father wants to build a new house in hometown. Firstly my father had been designed our new house with nicely and simple. That’s great for me and that would be nice if built it on the ground 2 are. I gave the sketch of house design from my father to the employer who will build our house and wish that the sketch accepted that will be nice house soon. All of our big family agree and give the positive respond, but the employer had different opinion and idea. They did not understand with the sketch. I confused and asked to my heart why the specialist of building house did not understand with that.
 My mother was decided to find another sketch that requested from other people to draw. She ordered to give explanation about how long, how width, and how high of building would be on that sketch. After that the employer accepted and agree with that’s sketch. They give my parents solution about our new house should be facing to the west, because the house’s too wide and need more space. But in my opinion are different with that statement. I want this new house facing to the south because the house looks so good and facing to the street. And for wide of space, we can make space of room to be smaller.
Finally, the new house going to be a terrible house and it looks worst facing from the street. Oh God, this was my fault who didn’t say before that should facing to the street. I was very disappointed with our new house. And now and next If have enough money, I will repair this house become facing to the street. If I have an opinion, for me and from others said that’s true, I will state my opinion and says try to make other understand and accept it.

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